The Tree In My Yard Poem by Valsa George

The Tree In My Yard

Rating: 5.0


In my yard stands a tree
tall and sturdy
lone like a hermit,
regal like an empress
her roots dug deep
her branches touching the heavens
peeking behind the sky's veil
She is in love with the Wind
sometimes he comes down stealthily
tickling her tender parts
and whispering.....
sweet nothings in her ear
overall she is still
Still......
like waters without ripples

She stands upright
brooding over the saga of struggle
from a sapling to a towering giant
Indeed a tryst with destiny!

Under the summer sky
braving the smarting beams
she remained uncomplaining
Below the thundering clouds
bearing a thousand needle pricks
she stayed nonchalant
When storms swept across
bending her branches in all directions
she stood on firm feet unwavering

She tells a tale of struggle and survival
she had stood there before I was born
Now she displays every scar and every stripe
on her corrugated bark as a proud trophy

Sometimes I feel her pain
when wet and dripping in pouring rain
or scorched in the sun's fiery rage
Yet she holds an umbrella over all
who come to her in sun and rain

The Tree In My Yard
Thursday, March 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: tree
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 29 March 2017

I have always been fascinated with trees and the way you have pictured an old tree in your yard, it's simply amazing. A tree truly symbolizes struggle n forbearance in the face of hardships. In all seasons n weathers it stands stoically. Growing from a seed to a towering giant to becoming scaly n wrinkled, a tree is a metaphor for life. A towering 10.

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Hazel Durham 28 March 2017

A beautiful tribute to the tree in your yard, the comfort and it's towering strength of purpose as you see too its pain and struggle to survive and yet it provides a sanctuary to shield from the sun and rain a gentle giant of beauty and peace! Superb write!

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Susan Williams 26 March 2017

A lovely tribute to one of God's blessings- the tree. The tree can be seen as a monument to strength under fire, or seen as a fruitful caretaker, or a playground for children, or a companion that never strays as we both get older. Well-done, Valsa! Very well-done. 10++++

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Muhammad Ali 25 March 2017

like water without ripples.... beautiful poem. love it

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Well experienced, nice to read, Thank you mam

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 April 2017

Tree in the yard has always been there providing shelter and shade. Now it takes a new life in your poem to be appreciated by many all over the world. No storm will move what you created. Beautiful poem.

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Bri Edwards 04 April 2017

a pretty big 'umbrella' it is! ! ! a fine new poem from my good friend! ! isn't that the tree i climbed just last week? a good view it provided too! to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Akhtar Jawad 03 April 2017

It tells a tale of struggle and survival It had stood there before I was born Now it displays every scar and every stripe on its corrugated bark as a proud trophy It may be a tree but to me it appears a metaphor for senior member of the family, what ever it may be, it's a great poem by Valsa George.

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Mj Lemon 02 April 2017

Nature itself, in the form of the humble tree, can indeed be stoic. This is a wonderful poem, Valsa.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 02 April 2017

I always like to read poems about trees. I like the way you tell of its struggle for survival and endurance through all conditions. I suppose one could see it as an allegory for the life of a person. If you like tree poems, you might enjoy my Walnut Tree and Untimely Ripped.

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