Sunday, October 4, 2009

......The Tree Comments

Rating: 2.6

When the big tree falls
Hit by lightning
Roared by thunder
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RIC BASTASA
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A compelling composition my friend!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 16 April 2015

The saying..... the bigger they are the harder they fall .... they say

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Ken E Hall 26 July 2010

She is like the tree not there anymore, ours is not to reason why..sad ending to a tale many have to bare...regards

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Joey Valenzuela 23 June 2010

'you were gone. i have a good news. the arrogant person here already died. i'm happy, are you? '

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 18 February 2010

nice entrance and exit... i think i rated this one 10... well expressed/said. Nice thought presentation.

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Antonio Liao 05 October 2009

what a wonderful poem...a pouring of all emotion... seems that aim carried by stream of the past.....a nostalgia that forgetting the past is to begin is to live beyond today.... a 10 ++++ yes! Boss your great....thank you and God bless

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