When the big tree falls
Hit by lightning
Roared by thunder
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The saying..... the bigger they are the harder they fall .... they say
She is like the tree not there anymore, ours is not to reason why..sad ending to a tale many have to bare...regards
'you were gone. i have a good news. the arrogant person here already died. i'm happy, are you? '
nice entrance and exit... i think i rated this one 10... well expressed/said. Nice thought presentation.
what a wonderful poem...a pouring of all emotion... seems that aim carried by stream of the past.....a nostalgia that forgetting the past is to begin is to live beyond today.... a 10 ++++ yes! Boss your great....thank you and God bless
A compelling composition my friend!