look at the tree as it bends in the breeze
listen to its wispering leaves
a story to tell if you listen well
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Perfectly … the figurative... «whispering grass O so weak» Drysidae more deeply realised mysteries … /10
This is a great piece. I love the line i bend and i flow with the wind as i go i never say yes i never say no i bend and i flow with the wind as i grow If only we could be like that. Easy going in everything, no worries, just go with the flow. I aslo love the end, to give you the answers the secrets would be told and the answers i would no longer hold so ask the grass for the answers you seek whispering grass O so weak A smart-alic remark. lol! It's a great answer. Why would you tell all your secrets when after it's done, you wont be the only one that knows anymore!
John, Very nice poem to go through. Enjoyed it.10 here