Monday, February 17, 2014

The Treasure Tree Comments

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'Grandpa as ye told
Once there was a time
When this tree was blessed with greenery
Lustrous of its prime. [1]
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Vivek Tiwari
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Neela Nath Das 24 February 2014

To give our Future the Renowned Shelter To live, to grow pleasure abide Brightening the Halo with Golden Glory That crowns Ancestral Pride.' - - - - - - - - great lines!

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Valsa George 19 February 2014

Yes, once the tree grew in all its beauty and strength and thrived the inclement weather, gave shelter and shade... Now it is fast withering.... it is the duty of every Indian to revive the tree as it is the symbol of our ancestral pride! Great write, Vivek! Welcome back! !

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Shraddha The Poetess 19 February 2014

thats a wonderful poem i can say.......fantastic........100/10 i also invite u to read mine.........

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