The Treasure Box Comments
I have a treasure, dear friend of mine.
I have cherished it long, you know.
Really, it’s a part of me;
I am ready to share it though.
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Very nicely written, and it shows real emotion. The unspecified (but all the more interesting for that) treasure is clearly more valuable than it appears. If it is your heart, or your love, it is certainly worth a lot, and the one you give it to should treasure it.
Very deep message, and intense emotion. Paige always write for the sheer joy of expression and sharing. I loved all your poems. Cheryl
Nice flowing and rhyming work Paige. Keep up the writing - you have great potential. Regards Mark
Nice flowing and rhyming work Paige. Keep up the writing. Regards Mark
Nice Paige, good subject. Reminds me of my Secret Love poem. I like your style and you may change over your lifetime but your writing style will probably remain the same but you will just polish and enhance it over the years. My compliments to you at this stage in your writing. Susan
Paige, what a beautiful poem. I loved the rhyme in this that worked very well. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us. Hugs David
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7/21/2025 6:05:37 PM # 1.0.0
oh what a precious precious thing... hope the one you give it to will cherish it like the treasure it is..... beautiful!