Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
Tuesday, October 18, 2011

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I am a traveller,
And I travel with a mile,
I work to rediscover the congested thoughts of missing brains,
I work to rebuild the convex curves of los human hearts in span of lanes,
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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)
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Jacqui Broad 19 October 2011

Are you a rapper, maybe? I imagined you on a stage on open mic-night, rapping your poetry. If not, I really think you should try it. Good train of thought. We are all travellers. I like your writing style.

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Soulistical The Poet 18 October 2011

Well Conducted, i was starting to like the rhythmical word too, you good kid, keep growing, and writting...

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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