The Traveler Comments

i agree i enjoy it

I enjoyed it........10+

The first verse was excellant and had a nice pace and rhythm to it. The middle of the poem lost the rhythm and the pace. The last verse, had none of the beauty of the first. It also ended abruptly. I felt as if the idea was wonderful. The presentation, however, really hurt the poem. GW62

Inspirational piece.... well done

A very moving poem by a poet of merit.

I liked the third stanza most. The poem has the structure and tone to suit the feeling, so wonderfully expressed. sathya narayana

Wow. I truly enjoyed this poem. It makes me want to go discover new things and 'take a walk'. Thank you very much for this poem. Elizabeth

its a beautiful poem! ! ! inspiring, , , , , really best! i like it....thanks jhane

A nice spiritual inspirational verses...nicely written..an A10 Best Wishes, Ency Bearis