The Transplant Comments

Despite your title, which speaks for itself, at first I believed you to be talking about a young woman who has given herself to an older man. That is the danger of not reading carefully and of bringing my own imagination and experiences to the text. Looking closely and carefully now, I see that you are clearly referring to a young heart having been transplanted into an older man. Anyway, this is a fine write and one that has given me an idea of writing metaphorically about a young woman who has fallen in love with an older man and whether he will have the vitality to keep up when he is a much older man and she still a vital woman in middle age.