Monday, October 21, 2013

The Transition Comments

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Yesterday I was a kid
Playing kid games with shes claiming it was dating
We always talk about love, we were just debating
Saying we knew love not knowing we were crawling
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Jasmine Fafanyo Awagah
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Calvin Curdle 21 October 2013

I liked the way you raced me through your poem. It means that your transition was a quick one.

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