Sunday, November 10, 2013

The Transformer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bright was the colour of white
dark was the colour of red
my friend had an ass like face
my friend had an ape like head
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Lyn Paul 12 November 2013

Very interesting write and so different from your other words. Such a suitable super title. Well done.

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Babatunde Aremu 11 November 2013

What a pity! Your needs to be re-birth so that his light will shine again. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing. Hoping to see your friend transformed from darkness to light

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Kavya . 11 November 2013

a good one...how when a dear one leaves us making an impact on our life is well said in your lines......

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Dinesan Madathil 10 November 2013

It tale you have told began with a humourous note and ended with a sad or touching finish. The rendering is excellent Kanav Justa..

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Gajanan Mishra 10 November 2013

I like this write, thanks, good one.

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