Wednesday, December 31, 2008

The Transformation! ! ! Comments

Rating: 4.7

I have found parts of myself from meditation and deep thinking
People were right it was a dark aura of darkness and pain
From seeing this made my heart and body sick
My alter egos are haunting me as if they were in front of me
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Compton Wright
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Laila lili 11 January 2009

wonderful and nice poem do you know that you make me sink on the feeling with these powerful exeprions if i could give you more than 10 i would do with my best wishes Laila Lili

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Marria Attar 01 January 2009

Great poem...i like the way u use the words in your poems..Great job!

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Stephanie Saba 31 December 2008

fine work! ! ! It was great.: ] 10! ! ! ! : ]

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 31 December 2008

'Does this mean I'm not alone' I can tell you with all the love and certainty I posess that you're not. I'm right there, because I know how it feels. It's a shame that the poem had to come to end, because I could've read it all day. That's the only way I can describe it, because words like amazing and wonderful just don't do it justice. Nice work, Bud A++++++++++

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<font color blue> angel 31 December 2008

Wow. I loved it. Its so true too. You are most definently a 10 romeo! Your Angel

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Crystal Torres 31 December 2008

i loved it yes i loved your poem as i read the line '...does this mean I'm not alone? ' i felt like you were talking especially to me because i can really feel your poem and no your not alone i know what your saying.

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