The Tranquil Language Of Water And Fire Comments

Part 3- -right now we breathe through masks inside our house and cannot see the hospital a blocks away so we are praying for water, tranquil or not... but it is pleasant to think beyond this time and see the cycle of nature that will heal- - > While elsewhere in peace / The birds sing and / pattering raindrops / draw attention / people plant seedlings / to a rich life, , , , , , , , , , ,10+++++++++++

Part 2. Whenever fire explodes / everyone escapes from / its aggression / seeking safety- - - - - - -> > explodes is the exact right word and not everyone made their escape to safety.... very well written on different levels of thought,

When the fire crosses / burning trees with its hands / and blows into them with its mouth / then water disappears / and dies / no one thinks about / burning birds nests- - - - > I stopped in to read this again... it seemed as if it was meant to be to read it again at such a time as this. We are swamped in smoke from all those fires in the mountains circling us here in the desert..

Dear Rose my gracious friend in poetry and warmly welcomed generous commentary. I hope you have enjoyed reading my poem, in the end of reading your comment may be people will think to fix the problem in their relationships or with the life itself..Finally I hope all is well with you and those around you. thanks again

Another poem of great depth. Powerful and perceptive lines that need to ponder about woven by an intricate mind.

Yet, they can take away life in their most vulnerable state. And we can see the power in them that no man can ever bend or stop. Nature and humanity must be in harmony to enjoy a wonderful existence.

An insightful and wonderful poem well crafted and conveyed. The four elements like Water and Fire are the roots of life. Life could not flourish if one of these elements cease to exist. When they are in tranquil state They bring joy and sustain life.

Dear Susan; Your comments & notes are important to me, you are an educated and conscious person. Indeed, my poems address the serious reader of poetry, and you are one of them. It is an honor for me if you spend your time reading my humble poem, the value of gold with a jeweller.. thank you my friend

You have pointed out some contrasting but valuable points about the properties of water and fire. A solid poem here that gives rise to thought! 10+++++++++++

Dear poet Keith Brown thanks for your lovely comment on my humble work, I hope you have enjoyed it, take care, keep writing and stay blessed

Well written great images a god look at the power of our world and our place in it

Greetings and many thanks to you all dear poets for these lovely comments with respect and love, Robert Murray Smith, Peerbocus, Kostas Lagos...and others Sorry for not responding to your comments quickly, because nowadays occasionally I visit this site, but I read all the comments with passion, all your opinions important to me.. Kind Regards

A marvelous poem, to my list!