Wednesday, June 14, 2006
~the Train Was Coming~ Comments
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As I lie in bed tonight I hear the train whistle blow.
We've lived near these tracks for about 12 years now so
I am stricken numb when memories start flooding my head.
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David Gerardino
14 June 2006
a manic-depressed alcoholic in full swing, great story...............
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7/28/2025 12:25:09 AM # 1.0.0
This is a reposting. I also seem to think that it is a rewrite. I really liked this when I first read it. I like it even more noe. The pacing is wonderful and heads towards a destructive conclusion whith power.