Wednesday, June 14, 2006

~the Train Was Coming~ Comments

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As I lie in bed tonight I hear the train whistle blow.
We've lived near these tracks for about 12 years now so
I am stricken numb when memories start flooding my head.
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Mary Nagy
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Joseph Daly 15 June 2006

This is a reposting. I also seem to think that it is a rewrite. I really liked this when I first read it. I like it even more noe. The pacing is wonderful and heads towards a destructive conclusion whith power.

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David Gerardino 14 June 2006

a manic-depressed alcoholic in full swing, great story...............

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