Friday, November 11, 2011

The Train Station Comments

Rating: 5.0

will he take this pain away
will he take this train away
the thought couldnt be held at bay
it is the way they say
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Cameron Penrose
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Jacqui Broad 20 November 2011

How ironic! Captured my meaning perfectly! You wrote this poem on the saddest day of my life. Very appropriate. Please read my poem 'Ten Years After' and you'd understand. Great poem you've penned down...

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