Tuesday, March 8, 2016

The Train's A Comin Nostalgia Poem Comments

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Once I heard the whistle sound quickly hurling through the air
my eyes lit up, my lips parted smiling from ear to ear.

Well you know it was another one of those early Saturday
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Melvina Germain
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Loke Kok Yee 19 March 2016

Don't try it nowadays, They move almost at the speed of sound! Lovely write Mel, takes me back 50 years. Thanks

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Bri Edwards 10 March 2016

i''m failing to get the picture of anyone grabbing a hot steel rail, especially to board a train. i guess you got the cheap ticket. hopping a train is one thing i've never done (among many things!) . i've never even hitchhiked though i've picked up a few, including a guy who must have been at least 75 years old. once i walked 17 miles in an evening because i missed the last bus to my hometown. i didn't want to bother anyone. thanks for sharing. bri :) favorite stanza: Nostalgic memories always brings forth a smile, one or two and those listening ears and full eyes will always find themselves dazzled with past memories that were tucked so far away from me or you. also liked ride/hide.

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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