The Train Of Thoughts Comments
Wishes fall lame…
Lamington pastries pester the mind,
Mindless grows the present
The present is devoid of any surprise, It’s plain, with no mysteries
...
Read full text
fine poem Shivapriya; the train would have more flavour if there is a death wish appended; nice to read
interestingly interconnected thoughts... nice write... Asma...
well thought, well laid, i like how the lines inter-link...please give us more!
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/21/2025 5:40:53 AM # 1.0.0
Mindless grows the present The present is devoid of any surprise........... the little poem itself is a suprise when how gradually it introduces DEATH....good job