Thursday, November 6, 2008

The Train Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

Together we need a respite from howling
In the inner depths of the train’s night,
Clackety clackety, inside full with feeling
I stir along with the train and thought
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Jagannath rao Adukuri
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C T Heart 06 November 2008

Wonderfully written composition...thoughts provoking in shadows and in silence...great job. a 10.

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