Sunday, April 26, 2009

The Train Bombing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Over a year has gone by
She was on that train
She heard the blast
But she was riveted to her seat
...
Read full text

Sandra Martyres
COMMENTS
Patti Masterman 19 November 2009

There are always little miracles to give us hope, it seems. (smile)

0 0 Reply

the flow of write is good. you can attempt writing story also. shan

0 0 Reply
Reetessh Sabrr 01 May 2009

the dreadfullness is staunch..only those who face or empathise can narrate

0 0 Reply

the scare this bomb culture gives is terrible...putting the common people in between has become..a strategy..i sometimes wonder what they are fighting for...thank god your friend recovered

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 26 April 2009

A moving write you bring in well of a disastrous event, Sandra...your poem presentation style is good...10

0 0 Reply
Fiona Davidson 26 April 2009

Touching piece Sandra....she was lucky and we should be thankful for that...Fi 10+++

0 0 Reply
Sandra Martyres

Sandra Martyres

Mumbai - India
Close
Error Success