Over a year has gone by
She was on that train
She heard the blast
But she was riveted to her seat
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the flow of write is good. you can attempt writing story also. shan
the dreadfullness is staunch..only those who face or empathise can narrate
the scare this bomb culture gives is terrible...putting the common people in between has become..a strategy..i sometimes wonder what they are fighting for...thank god your friend recovered
A moving write you bring in well of a disastrous event, Sandra...your poem presentation style is good...10
Touching piece Sandra....she was lucky and we should be thankful for that...Fi 10+++
There are always little miracles to give us hope, it seems. (smile)