Saturday, December 12, 2015

The Train Comments

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I knew the train's destination
But not my own—
A passenger—
I knew where the tracks headed—
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Eugene Levich
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Bri Edwards 12 March 2016

i MUST KNOW MORE! ! ! does this have anything to do with you, other than that you wrote it? ? it is from your hand alone, is it not? not a translation of ancient Chinese? does your wife know about her? ? a poem delightful to read; well maybe towards the end not so much. : : (? ? let me guess. a first love, lost to death or mental illness or other..... then longing and heartache, treasured bittersweet memories and a poem to share. my condolences if i am correct. to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Eugene Levich 12 March 2016

Yes, a first love. We are still friends. Yes, my wife knows about her. Thanks for your condolences.

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Eugene Levich 13 March 2016

Yes, a first love... and I was lost to mental illness (as you probably are already aware) .

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