Wednesday, June 16, 2010

The Trail To Insanity Comments

Rating: 4.3

When she was young,
still a child, I mean,
she left a trail behind herself,
of toys, candies, chewing gum wrappers,
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Scarlett Treat
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Chuck Audette 30 June 2010

Full of meaning and wisdom. Love the metaphor. -c

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alice sunderland 24 June 2010

excellent stuff scarlo. hope its not too autobiographical - but if it is - its sad and beautiful!

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Linda Ori 19 June 2010

An excellent portrayal of one both lost and found......and lost again. I was caught up in the unfolding of this individual's life, as a sort of bitter-sweet remeniscence. Nice read, Scarlett.

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Jess Silva 17 June 2010

The name caught my eye, I think you write really well

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Joseph Poewhit 16 June 2010

Poem has much feeling and truths

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