Deeply
Squinting
Past his pitiable myopic sight
In a calling discovery
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Interesting one here Debora, well crafted verse and left lots to the imagination! HG: -) xx
Quite a cogent & poignant Penning, young lady... Deep-rooted, indeed... A fine write, Debora'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F j R
Lots of interesting ideas and veiwpoints, lost me here a bit, but hey! who cares? there are still those out there that could grasp it Love duncan X