Thursday, November 7, 2013

The Traffic Sheep~ Comments

Rating: 4.7

It can be in the roll of the dice - oh happy day! ! !
As in, perhaps, more than one address...
Anyway you look - it is a huge gamble...
When speaking of Pamela and this filthy mess;
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Pamela Sinicrope 10 May 2016

I can't say I really understand your poem. You captured my attention by your strking words, strong expression, and use of the name Pamela in the first stanza! :) So are you writing about artists? Or is that just their 'cover story? ' I'm so intrigued. Do write more! ;) I googled Elizabeth Baxter and Evelyn Walker....I got artists and murderers? ? ? I think this is really well written, but I'm too distracted by the mystery...maybe its just me! :)

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Patricia Grantham 20 December 2013

A very poignant write. You do have a way with words and phrases. Glad that I stopped by. Thanks.

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