Friday, July 22, 2022

The Trace Of A Flight Comments

Rating: 5.0

wide wide dark wing
outstretched hovering

over the white fog, loud
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fatemeh zolfagharian
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Rebecca Navarre 13 August 2022

Amazing feel and imagery! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 13 August 2022

Deeply beautiful and ever so heart moving! ..

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 02 August 2022

Great writing, exquisite imagery.5 stars.

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Nabakishore Dash 23 July 2022

Extraordinary description of the high flight.

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Marvellous poem, Fatemeh. Expressions like ‘soul of the rocks', ‘the torn tether of dream' etc. are unique and elevate the soul of the poem to great heights and reveals the extraordinary talent of the poet. Keep it up, Fatemeh. All the best.

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Okim Otu 23 July 2022

Awesome. Top star.

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Michael Cochrane 22 July 2022

Very well written excellent

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