wide wide dark wing
outstretched hovering
over the white fog, loud
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Marvellous poem, Fatemeh. Expressions like ‘soul of the rocks', ‘the torn tether of dream' etc. are unique and elevate the soul of the poem to great heights and reveals the extraordinary talent of the poet. Keep it up, Fatemeh. All the best.
Amazing feel and imagery! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++