Tuesday, March 8, 2005
The Toy Comments
Rating: ★1.3
You played him with pleasure multiples times over;
Turn the key and have him play the symbols for you,
But this monkey has reached his final smile
And is breaking his symbols to run out on you.
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Sandra Osborne
08 March 2005
I can't really suggest how to improve this, there is really no flow at all, but it isn't prose either. Keep trying.
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7/23/2025 9:29:42 AM # 1.0.0
Yeah, it's not a great one.... It's one that I wrote in 6th grade.... I just started throwing up some old stuff for randomness.... I wanted to see how much I've progressed.