Friday, June 7, 2013

The Toy Store Comments

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The toys can move and be stable,
But always kept wrapped in the shelves,
Walking through the narrow lanes,
Of the toy stores with colorful designs and odor,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Chandra Thiagarajan 08 June 2013

Even to read about the variety of toys in your wonderful poem makes me a child. The last two lines gives the punch - so lovely!

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