Wednesday, June 24, 2009

~the Town Is Burning! ~ Comments

Rating: 2.5

This life is no longer safe
The only hiding spot is this cave
So I take a few steps inside
I let the tears fall as I cried
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Saadat Tahir 14 July 2009

very candid and crisp.. a bit sad...all ended romances are....but u paint a horrifying picture...almost brutal...someone who needs help.... you did a great poem....your footnote is alarming as its the real stuff...gut and rut watch out and tc cheers

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