Saturday, September 26, 2015

The Town Comments

Rating: 4.8

The town is hot and scorch
and stinks of drains and waste
The tall gothic buildings gaze at the sky
their paint dull with flakes
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R B Seals 10 October 2015

A vivid portrait of a town (city) writhing in the wake its existence and its people who are sorely in need to overcome or be consumed by its depravity. Your superb use of wording and phrase structure is most noteworthy. Indeed, an excellent poetic depiction truly worthy of praise (and a 10 rating) .

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 26 September 2015

Verily, the towns have lost the essence of purity

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