Thursday, February 22, 2007

The Town Comments

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the darkness falls over this little town
where it was once a bright and sunny place
where the trees are green
and flowers are brightly colored with
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Shelby Gosser
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Heather Mueller 22 February 2007

interesting choice of a theme through your poems. but i think that this one could use a little bit of a stronger ending. keep it up -Heather

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Shelby Gosser

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