Saturday, March 11, 2006

The Tough Questions Comments

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You say you wanted to talk
about our past.
You heard I've been dealing
with my own acceptance
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Mary Nagy
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Brian Dorn 20 March 2006

Mary, perfect title... I'm not sure if any explanation could ever bring a satisfactory answer to those tough questions? Brian

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Linda Hepner 16 March 2006

I agree with Ernestine and Duncan, but I do want to add that your line about the jangling earrings said it all. Amazing. I also like the title, truly honest, draws you in. love, Linda H.

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Duncan Wyllie 15 March 2006

Dear Mary, I felt so much pain for you through this.I wanted to take that Child away from all this to a safer environment.Away from this almost unspeakable situation.I don't understand, but I think that, that's the problem here.We look for a logical answer when the truth is that madness does not behave in this way. A part of you, maybe the little Child within still searchs for the answer.Well let me speak to her right now.'You are truly beautiful, and none of this was your fault'.There are wolves in the woods and you did not put them there.Hold on, cry when you need to but never forget this.'This wood does not belong to the wolves, they were free to roam but every lamb is counted'.God Bless and keep you and give you strength.Love Duncan

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Ernestine Northover 12 March 2006

They are 'tough questions' Mary, and sometimes one never gets an answer. Some people are past caring about what they have done, they just shrug it off, like a few drops of water on their coat. You've just got to shrug them off too, because you will never change what they have become, however sad it is to see. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Ghada Shahbender 12 March 2006

This is very painful Mary... it is the kind of pain that forever stays with us but if we are fortunate it doesn't harden us... you are of the fortunate ones who carry the pain and are warmer and more sensitive because of the burden.

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Uriah Hamilton 11 March 2006

Dear Mary, this poem makes me cry! I wish I could tell you how to heal!

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Nimal Dunuhinga 11 March 2006

It's almost a scream running to the childhood days.............searching the identity. Oh! what a sad journey.

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Gina Onyemaechi 11 March 2006

Oh, you're not taking votes now. Oh well, as long as you know that I like the poem. And I forgot to say before that the finish is top-knotch, resuming as it does your original point. Warmly, Gina.

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Gina Onyemaechi 11 March 2006

A screaming, biting, bitter poem, and understandably so. I understand this pain, Mary. You know I do. Warm regards and a score of 10 from Gina.

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Arielle Perkins 11 March 2006

I love this poem its so sad and yet true. I thank God that I live with both my mother and father, but I know any out there have grown up in a torn home. Thanks for the beutiful poem and plz keep writting more

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