Monday, August 18, 2014

The Touch Of Love (Senryu) Comments

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Mihaela Pirjol
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2018

Touchingly expressed and amazingly shared. Beautiful Senryu.

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Mihaela Pirjol 29 September 2014

Thank you, Mr. Brick. The images are juxtaposed, and various meanings derive from their symbols -for intentional free interpretation (Unfinished Poetry) . To me that drop of water though, was a real-life experience. Mihaela Pirjol

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Daniel Brick 29 September 2014

Four readers wrote comments on this poem but not one of them addressed the meaning! I have to admit I'm still left out of this poem - I don't understand the images - What is that drop of water? and What metamorphosis has taken place? I have too high a regard for your poetry, for everyone's poetry to pretend to understand when I don't. Besides with the poet herself just a click away, an explanation is so easy to get! !

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Ency Bearis 30 August 2014

Remarkable Haiku, nicely done

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2014

Amazing...Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Abekah Emmanuel 20 August 2014

Clarity is all that matters and you have it poetess, nice job!

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Anthony Burkett 18 August 2014

The depth at which these short lines strike at the heart cord is surprising indeed! VERY well done poetess.

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