i looked up into the deep blue sky
little white clouds were floating by
i looked upon this young girls face
she held it down in disgrace.
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Romance is alive and well in this fine lyric write.Take care. Warm regards, Sandra
from clouds white to clouds nine...romantic piece...gracious presentation...i liked...10
‘…we felt right there it was a love divine…’ Rhapsodic state reached…and final culmination what we pine for… Thanks for sharing… Ten Ms. Nivedita UK
she smiled at me, and our eyes then touched we knew then, it was much to much. our hearts entwined and her lips met mine we felt right there it was a love divine...it is unique divine touch and happens to only few gifted individuals with pure heart... lovely poem with very good message in it... i love it.....10 read mine anywhere..bbutterflies around and colour
I loved this rhyming couplet.. 'our hearts entwined and her lips met mine we felt right there it was a love divine.' very nice to read.. lovely poem indeed.. filled with emotions..10 regards shan
a beautiful romance bornthere at that moment....lovely poem
Into the deep blue sky! With the muse of love. Thanks for sharing.
thank you Edward for your comment