Sunday, October 4, 2009

The Tortured Angel Comments

Rating: 3.9

In the darkness damp
and wet
form tears that fell to quell what's left.
No more to dwell
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I write because I have to
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Some Body 06 October 2009

I love the your writing techniques in this poem, its very descriptive and sets the mood very well. I think you'd like my lastest poem, The End. i'd really appreciate if you could give me some feed back with this poem. thanks

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Heather Owens 04 October 2009

Sweetly distressing.10

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