Tuesday, July 5, 2011

The Torrent Comments

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One evening the darkness and the daylight had an argument.
Does this night deserve a little rain to ruin the farmer’s crops and animals?
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Ianaldo Prescott Pourchot
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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Ianaldo Prescott Pourchot

Ianaldo Prescott Pourchot

Laguna Hills California
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