Friday, May 6, 2016

The Torment Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love is as fleeting as the moment
It makes its introduction,
Stirring the heart, and clouding the mind
With its sweet and tender seduction
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Lora Colon
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Muhammad Imtiyaz 29 May 2016

wov....amazing lines....

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Dave Lessard 15 May 2016

Love tormenting and fickle, sweet and sour, tickles our palate until we scream for more. Nice write Lora.

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Kassem Oude 07 May 2016

Love's like a baby freshly born It needs more fondness and care If it pouts we'd cry and mourn Bad weather may kill it or impair.

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Bill Cantrell 06 May 2016

So many truths are woven into the fabric of this wonderful poem, yes love has indeed chosen the rules by which we must play.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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