Tuesday, September 16, 2008

The Top Banana Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mrs Asbury bought three bananas from the greengrocers. She took them home and put them in her fruit bowl, along with the other fruit that was already in there. Apples, oranges, pears and grapes. One by one the fruit started to be picked out of the bowl and eaten.
Well, Keith, one of the Bananas, did not want to be eaten by himself he wanted to be eaten in style. He squeaked, “I want to be eaten with cream and cherries or I am going to stay in this bowl.” stay, he did. He thought he had been forgotten about, in fact he was quite wrong and then someone unzipped him.
He yelped, “You can’t eat me on my own, I want more” and then, a magic thing happened. He shouted “FREEDOM” and sprouted legs and he ran through the door. He was half way through the door, but then, he was caught. He could now see there was cream on the table and there were cherries as well. He had such a lovely feeling inside and he was happy too. Now, his dream had all come true.
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Pamela lutwyche
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Ernest Lee Clary 16 January 2009

r.i.p keith- good one pamela 10 points

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Al Ramos 14 October 2008

If only we could think like a banana, and dream like one, things would be sweeter. Good work.

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Avery Watts 16 September 2008

hahah funny! keep up the awesome work

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Pamela lutwyche

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