Today we will open the Toolbox of Success
and examine each tool,
so as to succeed in everything
using it to the very full.
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You contained all the great attributes of love, of what love is in your poem. Great work! If only people try to love one another..
Patience ~ ‘Valuable possession never loose it’ Responsibility ~ ‘A rare chance to shoulder it’ Confidence ~ ‘The dense-denominator for all successes Thanks Sir for such a nice poem 10+. Ms. Nivedita UK
Success contained in a toolbox! A euphemistic expression. Lovely!
Dear Amrit, Thanks for this poem full of wisdom. Putting wisdom into melodious verses is much more difficult than writing about feelings (at least for me) Here you show it is possible to write about wisdom, to make it melodious and sound very nice. Content and language, both a masterpiece Thanks again for the poem.
Dear Sir, When you spoke about your first two tools I was a bit confused that how do you make sure that they are not over used and used at the right time But Bang then you come with these magical lines and the last and the most important tool Lines I loved 'But. When and How much these techniques to use? To enjoy the beauty of a flower should you choose? Or when and how much even anger can be shown? Or Take responsibility that's not yours even to muse? Or how much from the old and the new to be drawn? '
Deaer Rathi, you emerge in this poem as a priestess or as a behavioural psychologist. whatever you wrote towards becoming a better person is very true. forgoing so many pleasures to achieve something great in future. thank you Rathi
It is a bit difficult though a rewarding journey, From the rigid outlook to a flexible approach, your project of proposed tools are very wonderful. actually man has been already uplifted perhaps into machine. so the conception of tools are also meaningful. Thank you Write more.... Run long... Regards Apoet
glad to be the first to rate and comment here... awesome write! you got it!
So Assuming Responsibility’s another powerful tool To fool around, For success in everything, It lays the ground. It is a bit difficult though a rewarding journey, From shifting blames to accepting your fault, A defense mechanism to confidence vaults. And you're in control all around yes sir, success is a pride.. the way you do this poem is really very impressive and heart touching one..I really enjoyed it.. well done