Friday, November 6, 2015

The Toll Comments

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I rest my head on the ground
Hypnotized by the blades of a ceiling fan
Hollow silence, a deafening sound
Escaping this life within a fantasy I ran
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Estefano Molina
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Kim Barney 06 November 2015

Very nice, but I think you meant TRANCE instead of TRANS on the penultimate line.

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Estefano Molina 09 November 2015

Thank you, and I'll edit that.

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