Monday, September 8, 2008

The Toilet Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is a worm in the toilet
it wiggles with glee
surrounded by an ocean
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Mark Sebert
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poem hater 11 October 2008

It is good to see you have posted it. I am not really sure how I am suppose to respond to this so I chose to laugh. Very good.

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Marilyn Lott 08 September 2008

I don't know what to say, Mark. Never read a poem like this - this is a first! AND, why did I HAVE to read it when I saw it 'floating' by? Ya got style of your very own, my friend. I'll have to read more, keep writing. A 10 for creativeness! Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Mark Sebert

Newport News, Virginia
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