Now that the frost has gone its rimy way
there’s the matter of that long grass
that meets the undergrowth
at the end of the garden;
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Great, great job! It isn't just the play of the original that makes this interesting, but the whole content, the story is fulfilling.
Reading this title, I thought, 'Have I created a monster? ' Then realised, no. It was have been 'The Wrath of least Persistence? '