The Tirumala Hills Comments

Agree with DJ... each line is brilliant.. Here yawning time-distances shrink... WOW - I could only begin to imagine what you would have written if distances has stretched not shrunk... twould be an epic of a descriptive piece... instead you have given the best lesson of poetic economics...

Jagannath, this is brilliant. Your use of imagery and your line structure makes this a great poem to read. 'Words quickly change into things' is an outstanding line but it is one amongst many. The narrative creates a familiar world of contradiction and abstraction that the reader can only concur with. A fantastic poem.