Wednesday, April 14, 2021

The Tired Tassel Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mesmerizing green,
mixed with deep dark red,
the result has never been seen,
it could be dusty dead,
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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M Asim Nehal 15 April 2021

Yes, it is time to do some introspection and identify what to correct. Great write.5****as ever.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 April 2021

A one of a kind and lovely poem. Beautifully crafted. So mellifluous when read.

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Captain Cur 14 April 2021

The beauty of life and living vividly painted in your words! I really liked your color choice!

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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