The Tiny Moments Comments
What makes love great?
The tiny moments we dwelt.
The lingering drive we felt
And the longing we swelt.
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Lingering drive is elastic of the tiny moment... profound poetic depth!
A beautiful creation, well articuated and nicely brought forth with conviction.
Even though love hurts It rules over all with guts 'Cause of the human essence bursts Until bond finally wert. a very fine meditation on love and sweetness. tony
Beautiful words that flow so deep on the sorrows and joys of heart.. Definite 5 Stars
A beautiful poem that brings out the wonderful attributes of love. Beautifully crafted and mellifluous when read. Insightful write. Congratulations for a well deserved accolade.
A very good love poem...indeed, tiny moments makes love great...well written, thanks for sharing Varsha!
How much ever war raged In the battlefield of mind Love alone can calm sound For it always sees far beyond. Lovely poem. Congratulations!
4) To My Favourites.5 Stars! . The picture you added is very romantic, the amazing sunset at the background, and the two hearts at the foreground, imaginning me sitting there.
3) 3) my heartfelt congratulations on this choice from PH, laden and layered, a fascinating metaphored poem, enjoy it to the fullest, Varsha.. God's blessings in abundance.
2) 2) the best that can happen to us, but it causes many problems at the same time. An excellent poem that deserves the MPOTD, but also food for thought on many points,
1) 1) favorite subject in most poems: love and such a sweet title. Enumerated very carefully from so many points to a unified thread, love is easy, but constantly a big problem, so contradictory:
Thank-you poem hunter. Your honor is admirable. I was overwhelmed with this. I never thought to be chosen as POD. great many thanks.
Love is life Only if you dive....absolutely correct! I must cite two other lines from your poem, 'Yes the love we cloth in Pains a lot as it deepen'....beautifully composed! Many congratulations! !
Sir thank-you so much for admiring my work. I never thought this to be chosen as POD. it was the biggest surprise. Your words are always encouraging and guiding sir. Thank-you.
Nice lines....congrats on this poem being selected as POD love is always the favourite topic with poets
Very true ma'am jaishree. Love is ever lively and living...i too have written this love topic after a long time. My first love poetry of this year.
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7/26/2025 11:59:29 AM # 1.0.0
I love the way u write_ Please read a few of my poems as well like 'Consolation' and 'Brother in Arms' _I'm sure you will like it