Saturday, November 19, 2016

The Tiny Flame Inside My Soul Comments

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The tiny flame inside my soul
is growing and growing.
I feel the warmth and its flare.
It is deep down in me.
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Dr. Antony Theodore
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Jasbir Chatterjee 17 September 2017

May the tiny flame in your soul burn forever, for it is this flame that keeps us going, living, and creating...

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Ngimchule Nampeung 07 July 2017

Amazing build-up of the poem...Beautiful!

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Jaya Das 06 July 2017

Beautiful write yet again..simple in its form though subtle in its meaning....very thoughtful Poetry...Thank you sir

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Jasbir Chatterjee 05 July 2017

Nice poem. Sparkle of life must enliven, not burn, otherwise it will be a destructive force.

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Diana Rose Tolentino 04 July 2017

It is always a pleasure reading your poems. I like the simplicity of the starting paragraph and the gradual build up of intensity at the end, like a tiny flame turning into a blaze. Thank you very much for sharing.

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Marieta Maglas 08 December 2016

It will one day become a forest fire. The sparkle of dancing light in me- you're amazing, dear Tony.

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