Friday, September 11, 2020

The Tiny Bubble Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm just a tiny bubble,
Poured from a bottle of pop.
In a glass with countless others,
Some now rising to the top.
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Shaun Cronick
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Dominic Windram 12 September 2020

Intriguing and highly original poem Shaun...showcasing a deft delpoyment of personification. It's definitely a troubled bubble inspired ten from me!

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Cowboy Ron Williams 11 September 2020

I got a chuckle out of this. Thanks, Shaun!

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Shaun Cronick 11 September 2020

This has been rewritten since uploaded so it will take longer than the life expectancy of a bubble to show up. And lets face it...it's not easy being born a bubble.

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