The Tiny Bubble Poem by Shaun Cronick

The Tiny Bubble

Rating: 5.0


I'm just a tiny bubble,
Poured from a bottle of pop.
In a glass with countless others,
Some now rising to the top.

What does my spherical future hold,
What is my fate or destiny.
To be consumed or go pop!
Either one ends unpleasantly.

Oh why was I born a bubble,
With no real long longevity.
I'm resigned to my fate,
For will this world miss me...

Friday, September 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fate,heartbreak,sad,sadness,small
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dominic Windram 12 September 2020

Intriguing and highly original poem Shaun...showcasing a deft delpoyment of personification. It's definitely a troubled bubble inspired ten from me!

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Cowboy Ron Williams 11 September 2020

I got a chuckle out of this. Thanks, Shaun!

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Shaun Cronick 11 September 2020

This has been rewritten since uploaded so it will take longer than the life expectancy of a bubble to show up. And lets face it...it's not easy being born a bubble.

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