The Tiniest Seed.... Comments
Not so oft I was wandering
through the forest of the dusty soul
the air was odd, I hope i stay whole
I hear behind my ears a man's whispering
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the seed of faith growth into the tree of virtue as it is true with you Sylvia.. the difference between the creature and the creator is that the first one gives conditionally but the second unconditionally...excavate as our Arabic American wise poet (Gibran Khalil) wrote: it is good to give when you are asked, better yet is to give unasked..
More than the title, it was the beginning of the poem that made me read on: Not so oft I was wandering through the forest of the dusty soul... No doubt a lovely poem.
I am very happy that you drop in at my poem site since you are attracted by the beginning of the poem. I am a very lucky person because you start to read my poem. Thank you so much for your excellent comment.
This is an Excellent poem of course. In the forest of dusty soul the air seems to be very strange. You hear the whisper of a man behind ears, although you do not roam often. The smallest seed is amazing seed which has greater speed. A brilliant and deeply philosophical poem is excellently penned. Thank you for sharing this...10
So happy to meet you again now. I am very grateful to you, since this poem is a God given poem supported by my Mum before she died. I am touched by your captivating remarks. You are most welcome, dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. Thank you for the precious 10. God Blesses.
I was strangled by a seed the tiniest seed....a SEED? ! or was it just a weed? //// a seed a seed sprouts it's flight on the vast chest of the earth a seed that is yes; like the times old origin species the seed is now whirls around me branches and leaves gripe me here I'm for the seed its eternity stains now it's a tree this seed no poetry
Thank you so much, dear MAHTAB, indeed this seed no poetry, but God's Blessings for me. Your comments are valuable and myriad thanks. God's Blessings in Abundance for you.
This spiritual poem is really great. We feel this motivates us greatly and we are lucky to read. Tiny soul has major power. Have a great day!
Thank you so much, dear Sir DD. I feel humbled and honoured, but with an intense happy feel. Thank you for your valuable comments. They mean a very lot to me.
You are lucky enough to get the seed, Sylvie! What a wonderful poem have you shared! Thank you, Sylvie....!
Thank you so much, dear Bipin. I am very happy that you have come to visit my poem site on PH I appreciate that very much. Till next time.
You have a wise mother whose words of wisdom and thinkings guided and molded you into a beautiful person. Keep on penning poems that will shower this site with words of wisdom Beautifully crafted spiritual write.10+++××
Indeed, I never regretted that I have fulfilled my dearest Mother´s wish. She is indeed a wise and loving mother. Thank you Mrs. Juan-Austin, you are so full of caring thoughts. I feel flattered and am very happy to read all these responses. Your precious visit is highest appreciated, and the 10++++++
The title drew me to go through with this wonderful write. A great title indeed. The rest of the poem was paved and imbued with spiritual wisdom that will guide us towards the path of a beautiful life.
Thank you so much dear Mrs. Juan-Austin for your constant support and courageous responses. You are the only one who gives completest feedbacks and magnificent reviews, I so admired. I am you grateful immensely. God´s Blessings is Greatest for you and your beloved family.
from deepest within i knew that that was the Lord He spoke unto me Sylvia, that seed I gave to you when your beloved mum asked you to become an evangelist I sent you perpetually blessings, so do not neglect your promise... very fine portrayal of the Lord's call. i loved this poem. the little seed and the dark forest and the voice of God. wonderful. tony
Thank you so much Dr. Tony, I feel flattered by all the amazing compliments you worded here to me. I am happiest and I am thankful to God that I have met you on PH and you love the Lord too. I feel me blessed to know a person like you, such a close connection with the Lord. Thank YOU!
There is eagerness in mind waylays to know. Finest tiny soul wanders. Hearing a man's whisper soul amazes mind. In the dark forest there is silence in both back and front side. In deepest within you have greatly felt God's words. An interesting poem is beautifully penned. This is an outstanding poem..10
Thank you so much, Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir, for your constant support which I highest appreciate, your precious visit to my poem site, that is like celebrations for me and the valuable feedbacks and excellent responses and the sympathetic compliments. Thank you for the 10 too.
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7/27/2025 4:49:07 AM # 1.0.0
Dear Sylvia.. you give us pleasure of the loving life unasked..arm us with the knowledge that there things lie in the depths in the dark forest which are able to give more delight that the rays of light give in the night..bravo Sylvia for your prominent noble feelings- -I learn from you