Thursday, September 4, 2008

The Tin Can's Judgement Comments

Rating: 4.8

My head hung low, crowd screaming around
Yelling as if they knew I was Hell-bound
They are all wrong, I am a martyr of my belief
If I die, would it really give you relief?
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Dillon Gay
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Greenwolfe 1962 07 September 2008

The creativity and story are both wonderful. I highly recommend it for all readers. This is the kind of thing that makes Poemhunter worthwhile. GW62

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Dillon Gay 04 September 2008

I've seen that some people has not understood this yet. The narrator is standing on the tin can.

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