Sunday, May 9, 2010

The…timeless Surf...0605-2010 Comments

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I wish my flowing tears; stood witness,
to a crashing loneliness, in this cess.
O'had we not made a forsaken start,
and none had bet for a broken heart.
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Yasmin Khan 02 May 2013

It's highly nostalgic verse, serene and somber.We wish memories to wash away but they never. They flicker for ever but never pass away. a beautiful write with apt symbolism.

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Meena Mustafa 30 June 2012

Another beautiful poem. So full of depth.

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