Saturday, January 5, 2013

The Time Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time set out journey
All alone by The Noble gesture.
Stars followed time
As obedient shadows since then.
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Tajudeen Shah
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Soulful Heart 17 October 2014

I am going to enjoy translating this poem..............no disturbance....the theme of time gliding is really universal....

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Valsa George 03 June 2013

Time Tree is enduring, but ever new. Moment by moment, time glides into eternity. Riding in the submarine of time, we all will disappear once and for all and the progeny will come in to water and nourish the Time tree! ! So time is at once constant and in a state of eternal flux. The poem abounds in beautiful images like the sun standing solid with his energy treasure full, the earth with her innumerable play mates, the smiling sea with crystalline waves etc. Great Write! !

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Xelam Kan™ 08 January 2013

fabulous personification of Time...... a journey started with big bang and reached up to century 21st. through shifted images a cosmic panorama shaped Wordsworth`s nature where Hope beauty and serenity welcome this immortal and mysterious creature............ indeed Mr Sha succeeded to portrait the complex time matrix into a very simple beautiful and loving experience......very few has such divine bliss.....

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