Tuesday, May 8, 2007

The Time Machine Comments

Rating: 5.0

It must have been a holy man who left
the gadget at my door that governs time.
And using it feels eerily like theft,
which in my eyes sure qualifies as crime.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Expertly composed H. I am not sure why I find the second verse slightly saddening. Chris put it perfectly in relation to the last verse. t x

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Chris Mendros 08 May 2007

Defiantly satisfied. Can it get any better? Nice work.

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